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This is my creation for the school project.
Yes I realize it's not so good, and that is why i NEED critical comments. Please Please Please comment this so-called-poster and gimme feedbacks ! You can say whtvr u want.. bt please keep it appropriate . The Guiding Questions (You dnt hav to always follow ths,, but it'll make it easier tho -_-") Does this poster catch your attention? a. Yes b. No Have you ever seen some poster like this before? If yes, how similar? a. Never, this is the first time I’ve seen this. b. Yes, I think this poster is similar with someone else’s Additional Comments:……………………………………… Is it readable from a certain distance? a. Yes b. No Which part of the poster that I should improve to make the poster better? a. Color b. Text c. Picture d. Others……………………. What do you get after reading my poster? Please write a brief understanding after you’ve read my poster. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… |
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December 4, 2008
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comment: I like the colorful curves and the title. The curves and the colors give the impression of a rainbow which made the poster attractive. Even though the color is a bit too common, I think people will still be attracted. But the color needs to be more icy. The can is the thing i don't really like. It has too many writings on it, better to make the can bigger or change the color to be more attractive. Make the background to be more crowded.
peace ya gas ahuahahaha
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more more more and MORE arts!
haha
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a deadly love for my haters
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[ [x] life.sucks[x]_[x]so depressed[x]_[x]hate.life [x] ]
1) yes, it does
2) neverr!(it's original)
3) not really, the letters are too small, especially when the size of the picture/curve is getting smaller
4) Text & Color
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[ [x] life.sucks[x]_[x]so depressed[x]_[x]hate.life [x] ]
1) Yes
2) Never
3) Yes
4)Others: The background. You could fill the middle empty spaces
5)I know now that the illness could also cause bad nutrition and also about cutting into pieces the food helps.
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[ [x] life.sucks[x]_[x]so depressed[x]_[x]hate.life [x] ]
i just had to disagree with nihal and neysa. about the colors. (ini cma what i think) karena; it doesnt help people to get attracted. you should add more accessories too, karena terlalu banyak empty space.
uh oh! about the trash bin. harusnya lo kasih accesories dikit, malah jadi keliatan kaya kaleng kosong instead of trash bin.
i think that's it : ) eheeu semoga membantu
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take a bow
this suxx!!
thx aniwae
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[ [x] life.sucks[x]_[x]so depressed[x]_[x]hate.life [x] ]
2. A, nope, never saw it in my entire life ~.~
3. A, so-so~
4. B, you could increase the size of the text so it could be more clearer of what you are trying to present in your poster
5. when you don't carefully handle leftovers, the dangers would be severe in the inside which also leads to death. So by learning these steps we could prevent the symptoms from FBI (food borne Illness)
~.~ v *cheers*
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